Ethos:
- Mr. Collin's starts out by saying "I think it is a right thing for every clergyman to set the example of matrimony in his parish." - this is an example of Ethos because he is saying that due to his career he has to set an example because it is only right.
- "I am convinced it will add very greatly to my happiness." Mr.Collin's is talking with confidence and states that in fact if this marriage happens he knows that it will bring him great happiness so he is being confident in his speech and knows what he wants.
- "My dear Miss Elizabeth, my situation in life, my connection with the noble family of de Bourgh.." he is using the credibility and high social level of this family he is connected with to his favor and basically saying that because he knows them very well he is also thought of as in a very social class level and respected by society.
Pathos:
- "Choose a gentlewoman for my sake, and for your own, let her be an active, useful sort of person, not brought up too high."- In this sentence Mr. Collins' is telling Miss Elizabeth why he has chosen her; he believes that she has all these qualities and is complimenting her hoping that his compliments will charm Miss Elizabeth.
- "I understand that young ladies often reject the addresses of the man they mean to accept, when he first applies for their favor, and therefore I shall hope, my dear cousin, to lead you to the altar before long." In here Mr.Collins' is making Elizabeth think of the emotional reaction her rejection is bringing upon him. He is expressing his feelings and hopes.
- "Can I speak plainer?- You are uniformly charming!" On this sentence, perhaps Mr.Collins noticed that he's plan to get Elizabeth was not working that he felt desperate to let her know how rude she was being to him by denying his proposal. So he decides to call her out.
Logos:
- "My dear cousin, being, as I am, to inherit all this estate after the death of your father, I could not satisfy myself without resolving to choose a wife from among his daughters." In here I think he means that it is only logical that he marries the daughter of the man who has left him all his inheritance, as means of paying back the favor.
- "Consider that it is by no means certain that another offer of marriage may be made to you." Mr. Collins is trying to tell her that maybe there won't be anybody else who will ask her to be married and this might be her only opportunity so she should accept it given that she might not be married if she doesn't accept Mr. Collins' offer.
- "I am persuaded that when sanctioned by your excellent parents...my proposals will not fail of being acceptable." So basically what Mr. Collins is saying here is that because he is such a good guy and all the social advantages he has her parents will like him and approve of him because all the positive qualities and attributes he presents.
Now I will discuss what I am putting on my Op- Ed as Ethos, Pathos, and Logos that will help me achieve the purpose of my writing.
Ethos: To make myself credible I will make a reference to a scripture and also to studies that have been done on the subject. Because of the credibility of these sources it will help me add some credibility to myself.
Pathos: I will talk about the emotional consequences of not eating healthy such as: Stress, not feeling good about yourself. Also the positive emotional consequences of eating healthy such as a gain of knowledge, good self-esteem, and a happy body and mind.
Logos: I will talk about the studies that have been done on the subject and have demonstrated that eating healthy helps you perform better in school and it keeps your body strong so you should do it because it will make you feel better.
So far this is what I have come up with.
I really like how you mentioned Mr. Collins' tone when you talked about his ethos. I didn't notice that, even when I watched the video, but looking back on it it was definitely there. I also liked how you used the parts of the proposal where he was getting desperate and acting delusional towards the end. They're a really interesting insight to his character. I think your ideas for your paper could be a little more specific, but they're really good ideas.
ReplyDeleteKarla,
ReplyDeleteI like your 3rd example of how Mr. Collins used logos. It never even occurred to me that her parents approval would be a logical reason to marry someone. Now that I think about it though, parents won't approve of everyone that their child may want to marry; therefore, it is most reasonable that Elizabeth marry someone that her parents will get along with. I think that you have a good basis of ways to use ethos, pathos, and logos in your paper, they just need to be developed a bit more.